Sunday, March 18, 2012

Surprise Haiku [draft]

Surprise Will Farrell
Brothers with John C. Reilly
Mom: That’s offensive.

Understand brothers
Just like to find ways to bond
Quote meaningless lines.

Remember the time
We ran down the summer road
Screaming “Ah la la la la.”

Picture this my friends:
Five boys figuring out life
Nintendo rascals.

Rap session fire lit
Yellow light fights back black night
Please don’t let it end.

Interrupted dreams:
Alcohol, women, war, drugs.
Mom and Dad aren’t here.

Sometimes brothers drift
A brown autumn leaf swallowed
Gray river swells and spins.

End of a cold night
Always warmed with memories
Brothers finding life. 

 A quick rough draft I plan to submit Here.  Leave a comment and let me know your thoughts.


  1. I love it! Great voice and strong beat/flow, especially the first half. It sings :)

    1. Kara,
      Thank you for reading and I appreciate the feedback.

  2. I miss you too man. I will quote cuzin' danny with this ghost story haiku that will bring back some warm memories....

    once there was this guy
    with muscles up to the sky
    then they broke the sky

    1. Funny how his ghost story is a Garth accidentally makes the haiku on Wayne's World.

      We're looking at Wayne's
      Basement, but that's not Wayne's Base-
      ment, isn't that weird?